The quality of the story, as well as the storytelling was phenomenal. To complement this, fitting music and sound effects were used to put emphasis on the mood of the story.
The art style was interesting, and it fit very well. It appeared to be hand drawn, but you may correct me if I'm wrong.
Lastly, the voice acting was superb as well. Although the audio quality wasn't perfect, the voice acting completely made up for this, as it was interesting and not without emotion.
Great job on this, especially for a first animation. :)
I don't know what the hell people are talking about. I thought the art and animation were both exceptional. It almost looked like classic FBF in some parts, which is definitely a compliment. Good job on this! :)
You know, this is exactly what Newgrounds needs more of. B.
Graphics: 10/10: You know, I didn't see any rough pixels or any mistakes at all in the graphics.
Animation: 0/10: Dude, come on, there is none! Work on that. Make the Bs have giant wiggling penises or something.
Sound: 5/10: Well, there is none either, but what could you do?
Story: 10/10: Dude, the story is amazing. It tells about how B is infinite and will never end. It's really a tearjerker, but not like those shitty Nicholas Sparks movies. This actually has interesting characters and a great plot.
Gameplay: 10/10: I didn't really see any mistakes. The controls are smooth. When highlighting the Bs, there are no framerate jumps or anything.
Overall: 7/10: This is a great submission overall. Good job!
There are so many objects. I can't even imagine how long this took to make. Anyway, it was so very informative. The commentary was in simple terms, and it was often quite funny. The drawn objects all looked magnificent. The controls were smooth, and there was no visible lagging. The background music was a nice touch as well.
Newgrounds needs more stuff like this. Wouldn't it be cool to have something similar, except you can zoom out from a top down view of the earth all the way to the furthest observable edge of the universe? This is off topic. Good job on this! I loved your previous "Scale of the Universe" as well. I hope you'll keep on making awesome games like this one!
The art was pretty well done. I also didn't notice many glitches or bugs at all. My biggest complaint is the unoriginality, but if this is your very first flash game, it is understandable that you would want to try out something familiar. In fact, my very first flash game was a very poorly drawn maze game. :p My other, smaller complaint is that there wasn't (as far as I know) a way to lose the game. Lastly, the game wasn't very long. There was only one level.
I commend your efforts since this is a first flash game. I think you have potential, especially in your artwork. Good job! :)
Thanks for the art comments. While I've only just begun touching actionscript, I've been drawing for years. Thanks for the feedback!
What an amazing game. I really loved the art style and the dialog, and the small details you included, such as when you click on a painting. A few small problems here and there, but mostly perfect.
The main complaint I have is that there aren't any clues for some of the puzzles. I could be wrong, but the first puzzle was entirely guessing the pattern.
Other than that, though, the game really is excellent. Good job. :)
Thanks I appreciate it! Yeah the first puzzle is probably one of the trickier ones, in hindsight. There IS a clue, it's just very subtle. I'm always experimenting, sometimes things work better than you expect, sometimes they don't.
Thanks for the review :)
It looks nice.
Good job man, I like it. The shading is great. I bet it took you a while to finish...
yes it took a while but not too long though :)
when drawing things like this i dont need to worry much about proportions and details etc :D
I can't say that I can grasp your art style, but I do admit that it looks nice. Especially how the light illuminates the smoke. Good job!
I'm still trying to get my style right in photoshop, this was more experimental than anything really
Just a few ideas..
I noticed your major flaw in this was the coloring. Maybe you could try black and white drawings..
Tip 1: I noticed the shadow in the grass was black.. In reality, the shadow would be a dark greenish color. Try that and see how it works.
Tip 2: If you do color, make sure you don't leave any unintentional white spaces. It will take longer, but it will look a lot better. I can't really say a lot, because I suck at coloring too.
Tip 3: Don't be afraid to take a long time to draw something. The main thing that will take the longest will be the coloring.
Tip 4: Add some points to the grass to represent blades of grass instead of drawing plain green.
If you use these tips, it might improve your drawing.
I will look forward to your next drawing.
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